A Rainy Day

Posted On November 8, 2009

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Hey! Everybody. How are you? How is the rain in your place. Its bad near my place. OK Let me get to the point.!!!!!!

 Most of us know this poem and it goes like this

 Its Raining

Its Pouring

The Old man

Is Snoring

He went to bed

And bumped his head

And couldn’t wakeup

In the Morning 

What if we changed it !!!! What do you think about this

 Its Raining

Its Pouring

The Sky is so Boring

Because its Dark and

Its Raining 

STOP STOP STOP STOP!!!!!! Just wait Shreya. Just think how would a rainy day be fun? Why don’t you write that!!!!!!!

 Its Raining

Its Pouring

We are all Playing (in the house)

Its so much fun

Our School is Closing

No Homework Doing

Great Food is Cooking

We are Enjoying

Its Raining

Its Pouring!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What do you think of this rainy picture

 RAIN

 Please do share your poem when you comment

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7 Responses to “A Rainy Day”

  1. rajagopal sukumar

    Nice modification of an old poem Shreya. Well done. Enjoy the rains. This city needs rains more than anything else.

  2. Lakshminaryanan

    Good picturisation and creative .Proud of your creativity.
    Our best wishes and blessings
    Janaki & Lakshminaryanan

  3. kavitha

    wow shreya
    dont we all love the rains especially in chennai.u have done a good job editing the poem.

  4. Ramu Mama

    I am recalling my old days in which we had really enjoyed the much needed rain.Nice poem indeed.Why Shipra is missing in the picture?(joke)

  5. Chitha chitha

    Hey Shreya Kutti ,
    You are bringing back our old memories.your mom and I used to sit on the compund wall for hours together during a rainy day. Its fun full of fun no homework ….yeah enjoy.

    Good writing.

    Bye
    Chithi and Chitha

  6. Suji

    Shreya,
    Very sweet poems & it the picture put a smile on my face! 🙂

    Awesome job! Keep such poems, thoughts, pictures flowing.

    Enjoy the rain 🙂
    Suji

  7. Hema

    Nice thought, nice creativity.. The picture is very cute. reminds me of my school days and getting drenched in the rain etc…

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